Hi hi Yoshi (^3^) welcome to the Forum! My name's Myl, creator of Hacheeachkee, you'll probably see me running all over the forum time-to-time, feel free to stop by and say hello!
Your comic looks pretty good, it has very clean, professional qualities to it. The initial layout is rather confusing, all those panels shoved into one window, but it is unique in that it's almost like a regular comic format rather than your usual horizontal 4 panel layout; you make it work. Kinda unique for a "slice-of-life" genera, but I feel it gives people a little something more to look at when you update. The content is compelling, I'll have to confess the first time I saw those smiley faces I thought of Wallmart's smiley logo. Xo
The dialogue is confuzling... "No, in the face, no!" sounds like it should be "No, not in the face!" and "You're the hamburger most beautiful that I know" sounds like it should be "You're the most beautiful hamburger that I know". If English is your second language that is understandable, but perhaps you should have someone check your grammar before you submit.
I hope my criticism doesn't come off as harsh (^x^') Keep up the good work!
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