Hey! I need opinions on a title for my new short story. It is a side story to my original series.
Plot: My MC's twin brother fell in love with a mermaid in a previous story. They separate because he doesn't think it's fair to make her live on land away from her family and he has a child, so he can't go with her. The short story is about their last day together before she is forced to spend the rest of her life in the sea. Both titles "work". I'm just gauging potential interest.
