Hey there! If you're into thrilling stories with a mix of horror, adventure, and twists you won't see coming, you should check out my book! It's about Valmet, a rebellious mafia daughter who gets caught up in a dangerous world after a monster attack and some creepy supernatural events. There's a lot of action, dark secrets, and tough choices—plus, a demon offering shady deals. If you give it a read, I'd love to hear what you think! Your review would mean a lot to me.
I'm really aiming to keep the story creepy and intense without going overboard, so it stays friendly for a wider audience. I want to create that eerie vibe and tension, but still keep it T.O.S.-friendly and avoid the need for a mature rating. If you have any thoughts on how to make things creepy while keeping it accessible—without pushing any boundaries too far—I'd really appreciate your input!
I’ve been thinking about the pacing of my book lately, and I kind of feel like it might be a bit too fast in certain parts. I want to keep the story exciting, but I also want to make sure readers have time to really connect with the characters and the world. If you do decide to read it, I’d love to hear your thoughts on that too.
If you’re up for it, I’d love to know—what kind of event or twist would you like to see in a story like this? Something unexpected that could shake things up or add a new layer of excitement. Your ideas could help inspire some future moments in the book!
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