Just joined and wanted to get my novel out there.

It’s focuses on the hypocrisy of humans loving god yet not respecting him. The first chapter is a prequel so it’s skippable and we update every Thursday. I hope you’ll give it a chance and maybe drop feedback.

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I gave the first chapter a read and it's not for me if I'm being honest. There are a few contradictions in reasoning and progression of thought, but I won't go into that unless you want. I think there's some good, but judging the first chapter from a logic chain perspective, I'm not certain a lot of people like me would read further.

I hope you get followers, but I think you have room to edit.