Here is my comic!

[DTSaranya]

Hey there! Welcome, and nice to meet you! I'm relatively new as well, but you can generally find me on here making pointless threads when I'm bored, or on the main site uploading stupid comics about butts and friendship.

Great work on grey bird so far. The art style looks really nice and I love the way it seems built for scrolling with the spaced out drawings and lettering. Also love the way the title appears at the end - gives you that cinematic feeling of something that's just begun. I always love when games/movies/comics do that.

[Doubtcent]

One small thing that could improve your comic simply is changing the color of your typeface. The colors are a bit similar and they're a little hard to read against the background. Otherwise it looks good.

[cylmill]

I have seen you here being active,yes! Thank you for your warm welcome hehe

( *' v ') Aw man you really cheered me up,thank you so much for appreciating my art .=//v =)/)
Oh and thank you for noticing that! I really made it so because I love Tapastic and its side-scrolling pace. blushus Really? I'm very happy you liked it! hehe I do love them too! It hypes me up when I see one! ;DDD

[cylmill]

I got it sir! Thank you for helping me,I still am finding my way through the fonts but I'll do better next time! Thank you so much for your time! v)

[nathankschulz]

That is a cool looking comic you have there! I'm very impressed, and interested in where it goes. He seemed like such a nice boy!
And here's my comic The Shrouded City. I hope you enjoy it!

[chanalli]

I really like the art style and the story looks interesting. But the font is a little hard to read on mobile... at least for me....
Maybe making it less light or putting a little more space betweet letters?
Other than that, really good job!

Oh, and here is my comic if interested http://tapastic.com/series/13264

[R.n.P]

hello I'm also sorta like a newbie since I joint on 1st of February you can check out my comic if you have a taste for manga THE LAST SAMURAI hope your comic grows fast

[niinasalmelin]

Heyyy I checked your comic out and liked the mood in it quite a bit. I love the little details you added with animation. Only problem I had was to read the text sometimes, or more that I had to take extra time to read it. It's been a while since I saw cursive writing. Will there be more to this comic?

Here's mine! Let me know what you think

[Stinahhh]

I quite like the flow of your comic! Also a newbie here so you can check out FOUR QUARTERS if you'd like ^^ Critique and comments much appreciated as well

[PocketFloral]

Hey cylmill, really nice opening for grey bird! You've done an awesome job of working tap's format in your comics favor, the scroll down really helped create tension and the the bit with the eye's was really nice and climatic. Also the art is really nice and you've done a good job setting moods.
My only critique would be the lettering is hard to read ( especially at the beginning) and I'm reading on a computer screen so it might be even harder on mobile, which most people read tap on. I understand you wanted a light and airy effect but just putting a lil more weight on the lettering would make a big difference in the right direction.
Hopefully that was a little helpful. And since you asked my comic is called Glamour : )

[cylmill]

Hooked! I adore Stanley! hehehehe and thank you for your compliments sir! He was indeed a nice boy! ;DD

[cylmill]

Thank you for your time maam! ;DD I see! I will do that next time!!

I checked it maam! hehe

[chanalli]

The first time I saw it, it was on my phone. But I just checked it on my laptop and you are able to read it better.
I just have a hard time reading cursive fonts 😜
Remember that most tapa users read on their phones!!

BTW, thank you for liking 2lc!! ❤️

[cylmill]

Hello sir! I checked out yer comic! Thank you for your time! ;DD

[cylmill]

The font seems to be the problem hmm...I got it! thank you for telling me! ;DD And yes'm,thats just kind of the prologue!

Yes,Ive read your comic! And I love watercolor(though I'm terrible at it) and the way you blend it! I also like your cover/banner! I could stare at it for hours *' q') Oh and the problem I encountered at first was the flow,I got kind of confused which one's what but I guess thats just me? I'm going to keep an eye on your comic maam!

[cylmill]

@stinatrinh : *' U ') I LIKE ITTTTTTTTTT hehehe uhm for comments uh ...... I have no comments because Its entertaining! ;DDDD

[cylmill]

silent squealing SENPAII ;/////V////; I SUBSCRIBED TO YOUR COMIC AGES AGO AHHH

Thank you so much for your time and for your very kind remarks I'll treasure it! ;""ooooo
Okay I got it! I will try my very best to make the next chapter's font easier to read!! Once again,thank you! ; v ; #Noticed

[cylmill]

;DDD Yes! Okay I will remember that! Oh heheh okay,thank you ;>
Oh it was no problem at all! Keep up yer good work! ;D

[PocketFloral]

AAAHHH DUDE haha that's so cool now that you mention it your username did seem really familiar. Thank you for supporting Glam >o<,Your comic looks really promising and I hope it does really well!!

[cylmill]

squeal squeal Always a pleasure senpaiiii!!!!! eee!!! I love love love your comic and I very very much adore the plot!!! ;OOOO Goodness thank you for your pretty brain maam!! Please continue your superbness!! ;//v//; )/) Oh and hehe thank you!!