one technical suggestion - make sure none of the sites you're going to upload to lets you change site's background colour to something that would not work well with your page (made that mistake on webtoon by posting some text on transparent background and not thinking about dark mode...) or just add some solid colour behind everything just to be safe
I think there should be more of a background. It's kind of like they're in a grey void. Also, the ship is really weird in the establishing shot, like what angle is it at?
Are they being attacked? Shouldn't they be a little more worried about the situation?
I think it’s fine but you should space out your panels a bit more. Maybe add a big space between the ship getting shot and the shot of the guy drinking. Or add a transition panel of the window with his silhouette.
They have been in this sort of situation quite often, they are more woried about their friend's drinking problem.
