Hi there!
I was hoping I could get a review of my webcomic? I mostly want a review on the story rather than the art, I got some comments recently and Ive chalked it up to the story feeling a bit flat. And I wish to improve on these aspects when I start to write up some more chapters!
Here's the link:
Please, be as harsh as you like. I would like to really try and improve with what Ive got since Ive been told I lack "Character Conflict" and with a google search, it comes up as being quite vague. So I am just taking some notes on what I can improve on it and go from there.
And no, not looking for views or likes, just some critiques on my writing style and if I do enough show and don't tell etc, just general thoughts on what kind of information to hand out.
Just a query though. I am in it for the slow burn, but I want some tips on if what I am doing for said slow burn is good or if I need to add more to it? Like, chapter dedication etc or not.
Thank you very much! And it's okay if you don't like it, it's not for everybody! ^^;