Thanks!
I think I might change the font, I changed it in the newest chapter (after the two linked in this thread) and I think it works better, so I might start using this new font instead of the previous one I've been using.
blambot looks pretty cool, I'd never heard of it before you mentioned it, is it a free site?
And you're right yeah!
I try to tell stories within one chapter (sometimes carry them on in a way that can be read individual) but it limits the character angles. In the newest one (and the one I'm currently working on) I've began to branch the poses out to create more variety, hopefully it works out! And yeah, I really need to do more life drawing, I'm stuck with postures off the top of my mind
Thanks! I'll check it out!