waaah!! a fellow creator!
Okay! Before I say anything, I'll just remind you that all of these are opinions from a very amateur comic artist lol. I hope you don't see them as something offensive.
So I've read all of the chapters. Let's start with the genre, love triangles are not particularly my cup of tea but there are some exceptions.
When I first saw your comic I wasn't really "hooked" with it. For my case, it was because of the illustration itself. It felt like the colours were all over the place which is why it seemed a little bland(not that I'm saying that your colours were lacking of colour, in fact there were a lot of 'em, maybe too much). The colours were a little too saturated.
As for the flow of the story, I don't have much of a problem with it. I've read a lot of manga (I still do ), and I think some were laid out nicely, some were not. I wish I could sympathize with Emi when she moved out...but everything felt a little fast-paced, giving me no time to feel for her emotions. I think a lot of your scenes were fast paced, reading them were a breeze.
OVERALL, I have no problems with it. Your art is already amazing, and I think your story could come out nicely. I could definitely tell that you spent time on the backgrounds (I applaud you for that ) The story was really funny and it gave me a genuine laugh out loud. Your comic(or manga) reminded me of my 12-year old days, back when I was addicted to anime and anything related to it. It was nostalgia for me, and I thank you for that.
I think, a planned colour scheme will help you with your colour values. And maybe try to give more spaces in-between the panels, so that it won't look like there's too much going on. OH AND THE SPEECH BUBBLES TOO! maybe increase the opacity a lil'
SO YEAH. those are my suggestions and opinions. I really hope that I didn't sound too offensive. As a fellow comic-artist I know how hard it is to create even a single page.
Anyywaaaay, you just earned a subscriber! I look forward into reading you comic more~~~
Best of wishes!