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May 2018

Hey can someone tell me if i got the side view right this time? I've been working on it for three days now and i don't know if i did something wrong again.


For those of you who think this guy looks familiar, no he isn't Henri. This is Matt, a character i'll be introducing later in my comic. And no he isn't wearing a confederate hat. It's a French forage cap they used back in WW1. It's basically the same thing but different countries.

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    May '18
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Quick redline, remember to draw in the cranium , at the moment he's missing a lot of his head!

Not if he's missing the top of his head it's not!
Otherwise yeah, pretty much, you just need to think about how things like clothing moves in a 3D space to try and avoid it looking flat.

Your redline also covered the first thing that stuck out to me, being that the torso seemed way too skinny. The front's not too bad, but a lot of the concave part of the back can/should be filled in.

Oh right...

Well the bill of the hat can't be too low, nor can the hat be too wide, so i just raised the end and made it look more French. Adjusted the posture a bit and added his shoulder strap.

to me in the front facing his shoulders and torso seem alittle narrow to me.

In the front facing picture. His shoulders and torso look too narrow. Like they need to be widened.

Cartoon logic enables me to make a few exaggerations in structure or size. They need to remain the same. But is the front view consistent with the side view?