How are my angles?

[TimCaloweh]

Hey can someone tell me if i got the side view right this time? I've been working on it for three days now and i don't know if i did something wrong again.

For those of you who think this guy looks familiar, no he isn't Henri. This is Matt, a character i'll be introducing later in my comic. And no he isn't wearing a confederate hat. It's a French forage cap they used back in WW1. It's basically the same thing but different countries.

[craftymarten]

Quick redline, remember to draw in the cranium , at the moment he's missing a lot of his head!

[TimCaloweh]

but is it consistent to what you see from the left?

[craftymarten]

Not if he's missing the top of his head it's not!
Otherwise yeah, pretty much, you just need to think about how things like clothing moves in a 3D space to try and avoid it looking flat.

[comixbubbles]

From an average viewer. looks pretty good.

[Rhonder]

Your redline also covered the first thing that stuck out to me, being that the torso seemed way too skinny. The front's not too bad, but a lot of the concave part of the back can/should be filled in.

[TimCaloweh]

Oh right...

Well the bill of the hat can't be too low, nor can the hat be too wide, so i just raised the end and made it look more French. Adjusted the posture a bit and added his shoulder strap.

[beta1042]

to me in the front facing his shoulders and torso seem alittle narrow to me.

[TimCaloweh]

I'm sorry, you're gonna have to rephrase that.

[beta1042]

In the front facing picture. His shoulders and torso look too narrow. Like they need to be widened.

[TimCaloweh]

Cartoon logic enables me to make a few exaggerations in structure or size. They need to remain the same. But is the front view consistent with the side view?