1 / 45
Dec 2020

How balanced is your main cast?
Using the Character Balance Sheet Template below, show your main cast's traits!! Don't forget to leave tiny hearts others' work as well~
Oh and at the end please attach your work so I can take a look ^^

P.S The sheet template doesn't belong to me.

**

TEMPLATE

**

.
.
.

My main cast from Knights & Mages Online


  • created

    Dec '20
  • last reply

    Sep '21
  • 44

    replies

  • 3.7k

    views

  • 21

    users

  • 77

    likes

  • 10

    links

I'm a bit confused by the points, plus, certain traits could be considered as positive or negative depending on context too. But I do like the idea of naming out positive and negative characteristics. I remember i did this once a few years ago, but haven't really gone back to write it again, and my old sheet is probably long lost among all my documents... I'm currently writing but if I have the time, I might come back to this again :slight_smile: For now, I'll just book mark this.

Yikes.

🤨

That's WAY too much info to fill out XD
character creation shouldn't feel like homework. At least in my opinion. All of my characters can be boiled down into one or two descriptive words.

Ohh! I found my old sheet XD I'm basically just gonna paste it here. The whole thing was to write five negative traits and five positive traits of my characters. Though I only did this for 18 of my 20 main characters, I can't be bothered to do the other 2 XD These will have do. It's kind of a long read so click on summary only if you dare lol

Summary

Steve Abram

Positive traits

1# cheerful

2# energetic

3# always wants to have fun

4# wants to be friends with everyone

5# feels bad saying bad things about others

Negative traits

1# more of a coward than brave (he is inconsistent in his bravery)

2# too trusting

3# bad at judging his own actions

4# naive and slightly delusional

5# (referencing previous bad trait) is aware of it and hates himself for it

Rosemary Azure

Positive traits

1# good at leading

2# caring

3# an overall positive outlook for the world

4# ambitious

5# stands by her words

Negative traits

1# likes talking behind people's backs

2# VERY bad people reading skills

3# mean bitch type of gal

4# bossy

5# a little bit narcissistic (and denies it)

Richard Blackbourne

Positive traits

1# ignores unnecessary drama

2# is willing to help anyone who wants help (or if he is particularly determined, can force that help on others :joy:)

3# chill

4# honest

5# stands up whenever something morally wrong is happening in front of him (no matter the consequence)

Negative traits

1# lazy

2# has no remorse

3# not the best decision maker

4# unfaithful

5# generally doesn't care about his appearance (dirty clothes, bad hygiene...)

Roy Davidson

Positive traits

1# genuinely caring

2# protects the people he cares about

3# can be sociable if he feels like it

4# strong-willed

5# wants to be the best version of himself

Negative traits

1# judgemental

2# doesn't forgive or forget (which in his case tends to be more of a bad thing)

3# isn't good at reading people's character or weaknesses

4# takes things at face value

5# argumentative

Naomi Drey

Positive traits

1# friendly

2# very nice

3# always willing to help and listen

4# fun attitude for life

5# hard-working

Negative traits

1# clumsy

2# easy-minded

3# clueless of what she wants in life

4# too trustful

5# tends to go overboard when having fun

Levi Enpiro

Positive traits

1# smart

2# caring (but hides it)

3# strong-willed

4# great planner

5# kind of a badass :joy:

Negative traits

1# easy to argue

2# self-conscious for unnecessary things (because he wants to be perfect)

3# the overall need to appear emotionless when he really isn't

4# easily offended

5# gigantic ego

Christophe Francisthe

Positive traits

1# rational thinker

2# tries to be helpful if he can

3# careful

4# caring (but hides it)

5# natural improviser

Negative traits

1# panics easily

2# not used to socializing

3# self-conscious

4# bad liar

5# pessimistic

Eleanora Francisthe

Positive traits

1# genuinely caring (for specific people)

2# kind of shy (only visible if caught off guard)

3# amazing actress

4# enjoys socializing

5# attentive

Negative traits

1# almost impossible to tell who she really is

2# says mean things

3# argumentative

4# wants to have her way

5# reserved

Lionel Francisthe

Positive traits

1# surprisingly strong-willed and stands by his words

2# wants to be nice

3# caring

4# ougoing

5# right amount of trusting

Negative traits

1# kind of fakes his personality

2# unhealthy admiration of his siblings

3# a little dim-witted

4# physically weak and easily drained

5# very mean (sometimes)

Sarah Godfrey

Positive traits

1# caring

2# hard-working

3# good with chores

4# smart

5# observant

Negative traits

1# self-conscious

2# no remorse for her missing cousin

3# Ara

4# distrustful

5# easily angered

Angel Hopson

Positive traits

1# determined

2# laid back attitude

3# good support

4# free spirit

5# doesn't keep his mouth shut if he doesn't like what he is seeing

Negative traits

1# questions and suspects everything

2# specifically chooses his friends

3# likes to freak out people

4# not very nice actually

5# bad at decision making

Abigail Polinski

Positive traits

1# energetic

2# determined

3# willing to help (her own way)

4# friendly (if she doesn't find the person a loser or an enemy)

5# good at nicknames

Negative traits

1# multiple personalities

2# aggressive

3# dangerous

4# easily bored

5# bad at remembering names

Mathiaz Rider

Positive traits

1# friendly

2# very attentive

3# willing to help and listen

4# determined

5# wants to spend time with others as much as he can

Negative traits

1# insecure

2# judgemental

3# sees red

4# can go overboard (a lot)

5# unforgiving

Lucas Streisen

Positive traits

1# faithful

2# surprisingly sociable (in his own way)

3# hard-working

4# determined

5# "playful"

Negative traits

1# pretty much a bigot

2# weird hobbies

3# judgemental

4# pessimistic

5# hateful

Michael Streisen

Positive traits

1# smart

2# hard-working

3# humble

4# forgiving

5# pretty much nice guy 101

Negative traits

1# too trusting

2# panics easily

3# introverted

4# negative look on life

5# bad decision maker

Lusio Xavier

Positive traits

1# living encyclopedia

2# always willing to help and listen

3# understanding and accepting of people's faults

4# honest (if he can be)

5# trusting (of his class circle)

Negative traits

1# bad socializing skills

2# easily confused

3# lost in life

4# doesn't always realize if what he is saying is wrong

5# slowly learning how to be an asshole

Saga Zinfreed

Positive traits

1# happy go lucky to make other people happy

2# energetic

3# friendly

4# very attentive

5# accepting

Negative traits

1# a little dim-witted

2# hates herself for her weaknesses

3# not as positive as she makes herself appear

4# despite her best efforts to change, she is still reliant on her brother's care

5# very clumsy

Edit: Oh and here's the story lol

:joy: :joy: :joy:
To me, it really didn't feel like a homework while I was filling it~
I think I was just too excited to see how balanced my characters are ^^

I'm genuinely wondering the results~
Apparently my secondary character is stronger than my protagonist...? :joy:

@Sethstiel hahaha I'm just a very ... non structural creator. Things that categorize make me feel like I'm in school again, I'd much rather spend that effort on making actual comic pages or illustrations lol.

It’s just a few check box lol. If it’s hw it’s kindergarten hw. Plus it’s just a meme I think. People shouldn’t be creating characters with it. Too mechanical.

Dying out of laughter you have a 0.5!!! :joy:
AND A -1 & 9!! WHAT IS THIS FICTION :joy: :joy: :joy:

Here's mine for Arbiter's Wake

Not sure I like this metric too much in regards to my story because at least 2 of the main characters have HUGE character changes/growth throughout the story that redefine them.

Same samee I haven't even revealed all of my MAIN cast yet and here I'm talking about their traits..? WHICH ARE PROBABLY GONNA CHANGE :joy: :joy: :joy:
Btw LOVED your chibi characters :heart: