How Do Y'all Feel About The Name "Death on the Horizon?" +poll

[IndigoShirtProd]

So, the story (it'll be a novella or novel) is about a group of ghosts that travel in the direction of the sun that continually sits at the horizon line, like a perpetually sunset. A series of... unfortunate events occur along the way as the main character ends up at the edge of the horizon. Can't go into much more, as I'm not done with the outline as of now.

• Good!
• Needs Work
• Hmm, No

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Any other ideas for a name?

[jwabeasley]

Sounds like a fun premise but I think the title is generic. For one thing, a quick google search shows me that there's an active metal band using that name already, and several titles that use "Death" and "Horizon" together - so nobody will find your story even while searching for it.

[Kowai]

Sounds good right now, but it does need a little bit of work. I do like the concept of the story though, might read it once it's finished.

[IndigoShirtProd]

@jwabeasley and @KowaiWasTaken thanks for the responses. Yea it does sound generic and could use some work. Maybe some better ideas will come about if and when I get to writing actual chapters

[Paul_Tromba]

I agree with @jwabeasley & @KowaiWasTaken that it sounds too generic.

[IndigoShirtProd]

@jwabeasley @Kowai @Paul_Tromba
Okay, I've come up with another possible title. How about "Silence: What The White Sun Craves?" Since the story is about a group of individuals traveling towards the setting sun.

[Lensing]

Here is a different opinion :
I love the title, I think it´s impactful and fits to the story and that´s all that
counts for me

[IndigoShirtProd]

Thanks, I appreciate that. I'm still deciding, so there's probably going to be a few more ideas I go through, before deciding on something.