I can predict your future (CLOSED)

[teoferrazzi]

show me your comic and I'll tell you whether you have a future.

no holds barred. I will be harsh and mean if necessary.

you've been warned.

[CWCHASE]

You are a fairly good critic, just maybe you should critique then tell them what is good about their comic. No need to be harsh. Tell them what is wrong and maybe what they could do to make it better.

[teoferrazzi]

I always write harsh and aggressive post titles to get people worked up i never fail to include something positive in my criticisms, if I can.
note: this thread is for people who haven't attained their full potential yet; not for professionals who have already honed their craft.

[CWCHASE]

Understood. You actually do go into pretty good depth. I've seen some of your past critiques. I'd rather someone tell me my shirt stinks instead of telling me I smell good lol.

[Oreoma]

any kind of comic? :^

[Zanreo]

Sure, do Consolers

Con: Yet Another Gaming Comic
Pro: A "different" kind of gaming comic?

[ratique]

Really? How far in the future? Because if you can figure out what happens in the next chapter I would be quite impressed!

But feel free to try!

[yartzanaserenade]

I don't usually consult fortunetellers, but since it's free why not.
It would be a honor if I could get my comic reviewed by you.
It's my first project , it has a lot to be refined, but I hope isn't too bad ;_;
THRENODY
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I'm nervous.

Anyway , wow, really , was reading your previous critiques on the comedy comics , and besides being a good critic you really take the time to respond to everyone . I'd take off my hat off if I had one.

[TristanJensen]

Heres mine
But to be honest this series is only going to last a year either way....

[abigailkbacilla]

My comic, Commander Princess Maisie

Be as harsh as you'd like! It's my first comic and I know I need to improve

[infectedbloodcomics]

Go ahead, then, thanks

The Green-Eyed Sniper

[Doubtcent]

English Project Shorts

[Redthic]

Yeah, I debated all morning if I should do this.

Comics on VHS. Hopefully it isn't too terrible.

[teoferrazzi]

ok SIGNUPS ARE CLOSED
I will review these comics in due time. stay tuned.

[Oreoma]

ah great,looks like its okay for plot driven comics

right,heres mine >>> thing from a year ago
I hope its okay for non-tapastic comic
I dont have it uploaded on tap since I know its....well,its crap,to be honest

I'd appreciate if you consider reviewing it though
go ahead and hospitalize it

(EDIT: sign ups are closed,and right after I posted,some sick timing I got...too bad :/)

[teoferrazzi]

you posted before i closed the thread, you're good to go : )

[teoferrazzi]

too niche. you're making comics for people who are interested in the ins and outs of the gaming industry.
and your satire is too heavy-handed; you're shoving your message in the reader's face, rather than being subtle about it.
you should try and make comics on broader subjects within gaming, and develop your writing towards a more subtle approach.

[teoferrazzi]

this thread wasn't meant for you; obviously you've already established yourself as an artist and you know what you're doing.
any criticism i make of your comic would be strictly a matter of taste.

[teoferrazzi]

unique style, intriguing premise, i see potential.
there's one thing you've done that always irks me in story-based comics, and i'll say it again..
don't shove every character's back-story into my face early on. have it show itself organically. i know you've given these a lot of thought and you really wanted to share them as soon as possible, but this eagerness is that of an amateur. play the long game. reveal their personalities as time goes on.

[teoferrazzi]

you're ripping off Maximumble's art style.
there is nothing in these comics that is specific to a homeschooler's life.
i've seen the jokes you've made, with minimal variations, elsewhere.
you should try a little be harder to come up with material i haven't seen before.