I desperately need your ideas :sweat_01: [HELP]

[Sethstiel]

Hi hiii~ Sethstiel here ^^

Dear readers and creators,
I need ideas about transitions
Long story short, im currently injured (car accident) but that cant stop me doing my drafts at least ^^

In the story, the villain explains MC and the others, the world they're currently in. And I want to put some illustrations of the Fantasy world in my comic while he's describing.
But I'm not sure about my transitions between those illustrations.

This is the draft, I need help for 3,4 and 5 the most
What do you think?

[iHateFridays]

Hmm 3, 4, 5 seem fine, you could test it out by putting some actual content there and see if it looks cluttered? It's a bit hard to tell rn

[Sethstiel]

Okayy~ I'll try to do that rn ^^

[Sethstiel]

So I kinda did something with editing and a little redrawing the pics I've found that i thought can be suitable with my story.

I cut out the 5 cause it was just too many sceneries...

What do you think??

[wispysing]

Holy crap this is so cool! I think the layout is okay, the placement of the islands and text boxes guide readers' eyes pretty well. I had no trouble navigating through the whole thing. Well done

[coppermouflon]

Yeah, that last image with the image looks sweet.
I like how it almost feels like one image and it takes advantage of something unique to digital comics only.

[Sethstiel]

@wispysing @coppermouflon
AAAAaaaHH!!
I'm soooo glad you guys liked ittt!!!

[Legendofgenii]

Wow! This looks fantastic!

[Ordinaryaverageguy]

Reminds me a lot of old YES album cover art.