Man oh man, that looks like an amazing update! I'll definitely take a look at it.
My update is actually for a novel... and it's my first chapter. Would love some feedback! Here's the summary:
It's the year 2189, exactly a century after someone opened the Gates of Hell. Demons are on the loose, stealing the souls of anyone they can find. Most humans live in small, war-torn settlements, but a brave few scour the Earth for a way to shut the Gates. Follow the adventures of Outlaw, a demon-hunter, and Marionette, an insane assassin who loves to steal faces. Together, the two may just be crazy enough to save the world...
Stolen Hearts and Souls