I’ll review your first seven pages of your comic if you can review mine!

[sarahmcsquish]

Thank you so much for all the comments! Super kind and it means me feel good knowing my comic is reading the way I hoped.

[RosesnWater]

No worries! And thank you very much for looking at mine! Tho you don’t have to sub if it’s not your thing! I’m just glad I had the idea to do this.

[catluckey]

@RosesnWater I've read your comic and it's great, very intelligently written and your art represents the dark mood of the story perfectly. The 7 episode prologue was so good, it didn't seem like a prologue.

Only a couple of things stood out that would be nice to edit. When the mother tells the last story, it is in an Old English font which is very difficult to read, especially online. If you do use this font elsewhere, it's great for a header, just a word or two on a sign. Serif fonts are difficult to read online.

This may be only me, but the image(s) in prologue 4, starting after the name Netvor are too large. I had to scroll up and down again to figure out the image. I knew it was the girl's eye, half face, tear drops, but it took a while to sink in. That's minor.

However, you have a powerful story to tell and some very creative, expressive art to go with it. Thank you for sharing your talent.

My story evolves in the art. I've started out with some color pages then went to regular black and white, panel type comic. In Chapter 7, I started using color and scroll down format. You could either start at the beginning or on Chapter 7. I hope you enjoy it. Thank you.

The Watchman | Tapas

[kinleypavone]

Thank you so much for the feedback, it was so thoughtful! I'm off to go check yours out now!

[RosesnWater]

I’ll gladly read it right away! Thank you for your feedback!

[ComicOfThe5]

Hello! first of all Happy Anniversary

I read your comic and the art and colors was really awesome in the prologue 5 when the story began.

I only had a minor issue with the font style (you must have heard it before also) but prologue 6&7 was my favorite, the deer, the heart and especially the Crows part.

The story and the way it unfolds page per page is very interesting keeping the reader intrigued and the dialogues are also very beautifully written. I really liked it and I'm really looking forward to more episodes/chapters

Here is my comic. it has episodes so you can only check out how much you want to read it.

The 5 | Tapas

[catluckey]

I'm guilty...these "one-of-a-kind" bunch have been sitting on my couch. This is one of the most relatable and cute cartoon daily adventure I've read. The simplicity, cuteness, little wings, making tea, cookies, cleaning...and mainly SLEEPING cuts to my heart and makes me laugh.
I luv how each episode is short enough to keep my focus with a punchline of smiles.

[RosesnWater]

Thank you so much! I’ll read yours immediately ^^ I’m at work right now so it may be spaced out a bit.

[ComicOfThe5]

THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!!
you have no idea how much happy I was after reading this (cries tears of joy​🤧🤧)
I am really happy to know that you like my comic. I have no words to express my appreciation for the love you showed me, so once again thank you 🥺🥺

[jcmraz]

Sounds fair to me!

I love your set up Very interesting and got me wanting to see where you go with it. I'm not a fan of the fairytale font though. It was very difficult to read. It slowed my ability to get through it and distracted me from your artwork because of the extra effort at deciphering it. I get what you were doing, that choice didn't work particularly well for me. But I'll be subing and reading further

Hope you enjoy mine enough to read further too but first pages are important for getting people interested!

Runner | Tapas

[lynestjules]

@RosesnWater I like the story so far. I always love a slow burn, instead of a fast paced story. It helps a reader connect with the characters better and get truly invested in the story. Love the artwork and the pages look beautiful. I love the subtle use of colour throught all the black & white.
The only thing that really bugged me, was the font style when the story is told. It's too hard to read and it gets hard on the eyes. That's why a lot of fonts that are available on some software are not used. Because, when it comes to having a lot of text, it gets too hard to read and unfortunately a lot of people will give up, which would be a shame in your case, because I think you're story is worth the read.

Here's my comic series, if you want to review it. Keep in mind that I haven't changed all of the pages to a scroll format yet (my series gets printed) and I recently changed my font style, and not all chapters have been changed yet either. The fixes are a work in progress.

Megami Shiizun | Tapas

[mbindhammer]

MARB | Tapas

[RosesnWater]

Yah I think a lot of people had difficulties with the font ^^‘ it’s too bad because I loved it and it will take some time to replace but i think it’s for the best.

I’ll read the first seven episodes of yours right away and if it’s my kind of thing I’ll definitely subscribe, I’ve already read to ton of great comic through this promotion, so I’m excited to read yours ^^

[jcmraz]

Still keep the first letter of a page all fairy tale I would say That would be enough to give that feeling without sacrificing readability

Let me know what you think either way! and yeah I'll have to do one sometime again myself! I enjoy looking through new comics and giving feedback or finding gems that I really enjoy. Thanks

[RosesnWater]

That cursed beautiful font bewitched me. I now see it, glad the art got a pass tho! That stuff would be much harder to replace and although I love the font I have others in mind that aren’t nearly as complex ^^’

And I’ll read yours right away! I’m at work now so there may be intermittent breaks but I look forward to it! Thanks again for the advice ^^

[catluckey]

Awwwww, you're so sweet! Your comic is just right for this time of chaos. I thank God for you and your precious characters. My friend, you're so welcome!

[KiabIce]

Woops I forgot my comic too

Open Flame | Tapas

[RosesnWater]

Excellent I’ll check it right away!

[rifftiff]

Your art is beautiful, you use the scrolling format in such a great way.
My only critique was already mentioned above, the font is difficult to read, especially "y".
But that's a shame, as it is beautiful, and really works with the whole mood you've set. If it's only used in the prologue, maybe it's acceptable?

Bbangbab: Bread & Rice | Tapas

This is my webcomic, but honestly the first few episodes are quite old, and the quality of art and story telling is a lot better in the more recent episodes. So keep an open mind about the art at the beginning.

[RosesnWater]

Sorry it’s taken so long, I’m on night shifts right now and it’s killing me ^^’ I’ll be glad to read your comic tho!