Your art is beautiful, you use the scrolling format in such a great way.
My only critique was already mentioned above, the font is difficult to read, especially "y".
But that's a shame, as it is beautiful, and really works with the whole mood you've set. If it's only used in the prologue, maybe it's acceptable?
This is my webcomic, but honestly the first few episodes are quite old, and the quality of art and story telling is a lot better in the more recent episodes. So keep an open mind about the art at the beginning.