Hi, @Satsuki98!
I find it difficult to critique your comic properly, because I am literally unable to read it. I'm on a desktop computer, and the text of your comic is so thin, AND it's white on black, that the narrative text is impossible for me to read. I imagine it's even more difficult for those using the mobile-version of the site. I suggest picking one font to stick to, and to make it a slightly bolder one so that the letters are easier to read against a dark background. I also suggest making what is now the smallest text slightly larger, which would also make it easier to read. White-on-black text is always more difficult to read than black-on-white, so you need to go the extra mile to make it readable.
As for the visuals, they are very, very dark. I'm assuming the first scene takes place at night, which would explain the darkness, but it is in fact so dark that it's difficult to tell what's going on. Perhaps consider using a slightly paler colour-scheme, so that it's easier to tell what's happening, and where the characters are?
