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Jun 2024

Personally I feel that the action goes too fast. The specific fight moves don't get a chance to stand out.
Also I would've liked to see more dynamic shots. Now you've got what my old teacher used to call a "puppet theater" effect going on. Try using a close up or two in the action, have a single big movement go across several cuts (while maintaining the fluidity of the motion.) Further, I'd try to put in a break or two between bits of action.

No problemo. I've got a couple of degrees in animation and have some professional experience as well. Plus, action scenes are kinda my strong suit (my thesis film was literally just an action sequence haha).