I started a new series

[drv001]

http://tapastic.com/episode/193021

your opinions are valuable to me.

[blu3random]

another sword comic, idk, I think there are too many swords in comics, tv and video... then again im one ot talk, my comic has swords too... any hoo... the art could use a little work, it reminds me of lemon grass from adventuretime ish, but the comic is pretty entertaining! though not sure where its going...

[Luie]

Your linework is very pleasing to my eyes. Usually it's hard to tell what's what in B/W comics, but I can see everything fine.
The story just started, so I can't say much yet. But given, your description, to be honest the story sounds very predictable. There are tons of stories just like it. That doesn't mean it should change. As long as you put your own creativity into an unoriginal plot, it instantly becomes original.

Good luck!

[kazukitakamura126]

You started the story to an action packed start but, a small one to two sentence narrative could give the first scene some context. One other this is when the masked person strikes the sword on the ground he would have a hos sword over his head so it looks like he is about to swing his sword in that particular way.