OK so when i clicked play buttun, id have to admit i was expecting extremely low quality work but my man!!! you brung it home!!!!!! for the production you guys did AWSOME, both with the voices and the animation.
now for the things i did not like and hope you will improve on, number one the video just started out of no where. i diddnt know what the hell was happening, who was who, what they where doing why they where doing it. you started the video just right off the bat, no lube or nothing to warm me up. could have atleast put some text in the beginning to atleast let us know whats up.
even if it is a test run production, it doesnt hurt to give your audience some detail on whats going on. give me more information on the background of whats happening so that i can be invested into someone. i couldnt get invested because i diddnt even know the dudes name or what he was fighting for. when you start making more professional animation productions things like this have to be thought about before you make the animation. even if its a teaser clip, a trailer to a movie, TV show or to a porn it needs context.
