I want an honest review of my comic

[Neo_Uma]

It's honestly pretty hard to get feedback as a small comic creator so I came here looking for some. Responses would very appreciated! Here's my comic:

Lucifer's Lies (H)

[AmandaJ-art]

The art looks lovely and the paneling is really good : )

[DasIstWunderblyat]

I don't like Isekai and I approached your comic feeling sceptical. It turns out there is more into it and it has an interesting twist (spoiler!). Pretty interesting set up.

Maybe my input is just the pacing, somehow I feel everything just went by a bit too quick, especially for the chapter one. I know you might make it quick because of it's not that important, but stretching it may cause more surprise.

[Kelheor]

I really didn't like how the first MC is missing eyes for good 3/4 of the first episode, drawing people without eyes is an approach that only works in very selective scenes.
Luci short for Lucifer as a flashy reveal don't make sense. It doesn't seem that this gal is a fallen angel Lucifer, so this reference means nothing at all within this particular universe.
You are pretty good at paneling! The art is nice, although anatomy can always have more attention (but you know, it's true for all of us, I just want to draw attention to the first MC last scene, it's really needs some closer look). The pacing was hurried, especially in the first episode, but I think it became better later. I like how Fae turned out to be a decent creature I disliked all the "oh I am in isekai" phrasing from the first episode a lot, this is just too much pushing the isekai setting in the face

[Neo_Uma]

Thank you very much!

[Neo_Uma]

I'm glad you liked the twist! And yeah, the pacing for my first episode is really quick, it's because the short story competition is only limited to 5 episodes so I tried to fit in a lot for my first episode. But I'm glad you took the time to check it out!

[Neo_Uma]

The first MC has his eyes missing as a sort of parody a certain type of anime protagonist, I didn't think too much of it
As for the name 'Lucifer' well that will be explained so don't worry about that. And the pacing for the first episode is pretty quick, I tried to fit everything in for the big reveal at the end as a cliffhanger.
This is honestly some of the best criticism I've gotten, everything you critiqued was very helpful, really appreciate it! Thank you!

[Azifri]

At first I was like, eh, another isekai, but I really liked the twist at the end of the 1st/beginning of the 2nd episode, and I like how you're building the relationship between the MC and Fae

The only thing I'm not feeling is the impact the names are supposed to have. I feel I'm supposed to be impressed by her name being Lucifer, or Lucy Fern, but for some reason I'm not getting it. It's a secondary thing though, doesn't make me dislike the story.