I wanted some opinions about my webcomic

[Panda007]

Hello, fellow comic enthusiasts!
I have been posting my comic Life of Panda for some time now. Initially I posted once a week, but now that I have more time I'm posting it twice a week, Now that I'm dedicating more time to it, I wanted to know what are its flaws and/or strengths in the perspective of other people. Any feedback you guys give me will be highly appreciated!

[AnnaLandin]

You've got a really cute art style! And I like the way we get to peek into your life - you seem to have a lot of fun stuff going on!

A few things you might want to work on:

1. A lot of your characters look very similar! I don't always know who is who, especially once the main character (that is, you) cut their hair short. Working on making different characters look distinct from one another will help clear up the confusion, I think.

2. I know this is based on stuff that's happened in your life, but a lot of the time, your episodes don't make me laugh, because there's no real punchline. And when there is a punchline, you don't always build up to it properly. For example, the episode "Cooking.. or not" works really well as a joke! You've got the first two panels setting up the situation, the third panel building up to the joke, and then the last panel delivering the punchline. That's great! It made me giggle!

But some of the other episodes don't really build up to a joke the same way that episode does, and they don't really communicate the situation well. I think you need to work a bit on pacing the joke - or the plot of the episode, if it isn't supposed to be a joke - so that it just flows better. Which isn't easy! It takes a lot of practise and trying different things until you figure it out, but you're definitely on your way there!

[lindseyjb]

you have good consistency in you comics.
good humor and design but i also think that its sometimes hard to figure out who is who.
if you want to keep your character designs the same i would suggest making the line art for each character a slightly different color from each other.
Other then that i think you have a good comic. keep up the good work.

[Panda007]

Thanks for the feedback!
I will try to come up with ways to make the characters different, but still trying to keep the same style!
About the punchline, I guess I'm still trying to find "my own way of making jokes"... I will put more effort in it!
Thanks again for taking your time to help me!

[Panda007]

Hi! Thanks for giving me your feedback!!!
I will try to make the characters more different. About the color, I like keeping it all in the same color, but I will try it out.
I'm happy you liked my comic!

[iasucomic]

This kind of slice-of-life gag strip isn't my cup of tea, but that's just my opinion.

This is also just my opinion, but I don't care for the color. The thin pinkish lines on white are hard to focus on and feel insubstantial. Overall the color scheme is just too low-contrast for me.

[Panda007]

@lindseyjb and @AnnaLandin
So, I tried to change the color in one of the comics (only the main character):

Is it better? Should I use a different color for the main character? Stick to just one color?
I'm really bad at deciding color stuff so help @_@

[AnnaLandin]

I think the colour change helps! It makes it easier to figure out who is who. : ) If you aren't sure about it, keep experimenting until you find something you like.

[BraveHeartTatsumaki]

I like the consistence of your drawings, also it's all VERY clean, in your drawing you uploaded here in the post I like it with the change of colour, it helps to identify characters, maybe set certain clours for certain characters might help to people not get lost in who is who.
Well the pannel of the cat made my laugh so hard xD so keep the good work! ^^

[sipulisupili]

I think files could be smaller. Now they are downloading little too long for me. Since there is no colors etc. I think file size could be easy to get small withouth losing quality.