Your art has improved a lot since the first episode (great job btw!), but there will still be critiques on how the story is conveyed visually.
First page is the reader's first impression and I feel maybe this could be a more detailed as it is a splash page/cover. I like the imagery of the one character being literally split from the other characters (it gives you a bit of insight to some character drama) but I feel since people will see this page first and they will stare at it longer, maybe it should need refining. Maybe show where this picture is held. Is it a drawing? Is it a photograph? Maybe add more details to the characters and make the ripped up picture a bigger part of the composition, since right now it just has a plain grey in the background.
You also tend to have a lot of repetition since most of the shots are the characters standing straight to 3/4 to the camera, mainly torso up. Varying this with pulled out shots of the whole character and close ups as well as changing the view they are facing can help add variation and visual interest. An example of this would be when a character is talking to another character, have just the back of one character visible. I actually quite like the last panel of your first episode as the line 'Yes. A very big day indeed." along with a close up of her eyes shows a sort of seriousness or determination.
In terms of writing- I quite like the joke of 'oh there can't be 2 norse gods in a 50 mile radius' only to move the scene to that happening. It's an efficient and comedic way to change scenes. However, I do feel the last conversation doesn't flow naturally, as I wasn't sure of how it went from "He got tangled exploring Loptrcavern to the dad saying he has to pick up her tiara. Maybe if he was shown to be in a hurry this would make more sense?
I also feel like you're telling us a lot more than showing, and this might also be because the shots of the characters are very limited. Since the characters know of each other's situation, maybe have the characters know and the audience find out through character interactions. That way you create a bit of mystery. Maybe have her make a comment about her family, and the other character make a joke. That way, you can establish both their relationship and her relationship to her family.
Those are my critiques! I hope those help, even if you may have fixed these things in later chapters.