I'd like Feedback on my Story

[blitz_kreed]

Hello, I'm blitz_kreed, the Author of Aurexis. I've seen multiple threads like this before, and I decided I'd like do one of these.

Therefore, I was hoping if I could get some feedback on my Story! (Feel like I've gotten a bit rusty since I haven't hopped on the writing board in a while cuz of exams)

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[Dadoche]

Hi ! I'm not really good at giving feedbacks but I'll tell you what I liked from your story based on the first chapter that I read.

I liked the overall premise of the story and how intentional you were with showing strong emotions and tension between the characters. It makes you want to see the rest of Mi’kael's emotional and character development overtime.

If I would have a piece of feedback, I would say that the pacing is a bit fast. (But maybe you meant it to be that way which is totally not a problem !)

[blitz_kreed]

Thank you. And yes, the core event was intended to be partially fast-paced to show the loss of control within the situation itself.