If you have a funny comic post it here and i'll give you my brutally honest opinion

[teoferrazzi]

I'm bored so i'll give you one or two sentence critiques of a funny comic. [no story-driven comic pls, i ain't got the time for that]
that's it, no other gimmicks. post your funny here and i'll tell you whether it's any good.

[SandraMJ]

Jars

There. Can you relate? :B

[teoferrazzi]

@SandraMJ I can't review a comic by a potential collaborator.. it's conflict of interest m8

[SandraMJ]

Conflict of interests? Dunno how other people act, but I just take constructive criticism in :B So gimme what you got pal, I won't begin crying.

[teoferrazzi]

you axed for this

it's a relatable comic, you know. for what it is, it's good. i can't say i haven't seen the concept done before,
and personally i prefer it when women portray themselves as something other than the stereotypical damsel in distress.
it does feel a bit on the safe side, in my opinion.

[SandraMJ]

Haha, well, it's based on my life experience with jars. I can't open them for the life of me but damn me if I won't try at least :B

I think there's a little damsel in distress in all of us, even in the biggest and the badest ^^

Thanks a lot!

[teoferrazzi]

no problem! i could have a whole discussion as to whether a real life experience can be considered stereotypical or not when conveyed in a comic, but there's a time and a place for that, and the time is tonight before bed, and the place is in my head.
cheers

[purrlpankras]

Try me making jokes about my sad life...

Zenith's Stress Relieving

[teoferrazzi]

@purrlpankras7 specific episode breh

[purrlpankras]

Oh er... you'd really have to read all of them to get the humour really but meh
MEH

[teoferrazzi]

I don't get it, ok this guy is a bit absent-minded or whatever. but why do people expect him to 'see' stuff when he stares at a wall? who are these people having weird expectations?

[purrlpankras]

Uhhh this is why you'd have to look into it a bit more.

Basically hes a demon, demons are expected to be evil and kill things. But people who know him know hes just soft and likes cats.
When really he just likes to space out and stare at walls. /one of his strange hobbies/

Basically the modern expectation of a /metal head who wears all black clothes and stuff, but is actually nice when spoken to/
idk its hard to explain. I only picked this because it was the most popular episode...

[teoferrazzi]

pick one i can understand without context.

[jvntolentino]

http://tapastic.com/episode/105072

Slay

[purrlpankras]

my personal favourite then

This

[teoferrazzi]

@jvntolentino I enjoyed the dialogue throughout, it has decent personality. punchline is weak but you had to follow-up into the next episode somehow, so I can't dock points for it.

[teoferrazzi]

@purrlpankras7 the joke is that he says he's chilling, but he's actually taking a dump? I don't really find humor in that.

[purrlpankras]

Yeah, meh, cant win em all

[muhdreams]

Sure! I'll just drop this little bad boy here.

[teoferrazzi]

@muhdreams dumb art style, dumb joke. as a complete package it's perfect. don't stop.