If you saw this cover ,would it make you want to check out my webcomic?

[Beltaine]

it's not my cup of tea but i actually think it's nice that it's not all bright and heavy.
it makes it look like a calm and nice story

[SignedA]

I'm not sure I would click, but what I'm sure is that the graphical style really stands out from all the other webtoons. The only things that could be reworked would be, as others point out, the title which may lack visibility and the somewhat too striking resemblance of the two boys. Unless in your story it is indeed twins in love with the same girl.

Otherwise your title reminds me of someone who wrote it on a foggy window. You know, when it's raining and you're in the car ... and you might be dissolving a little face from the fog that has formed on the door glass. Well, it looks like this! Besides, it could be the door of a bus, who knows !? ; )

[jcmraz]

No. But that requires elaboration. It looks very good and showcases what I should expect in general from the story. That said I'm probably not interested in that specific type of story. But if I was, I think this would work on me. I'm the wrong audience. Good cover though

[Legendofgenii]

I can't really comment, because I don't like my own cover lol - but I was going to say if you'd don't even like it then it's not the one.

[Rhonder]

Not particularly... but for me the main reason is that the title implies that it's a romance comic and I'm not too interested in that genre

As an aside, if you end up revising the title, you may want to make the title itself a bit larger and more legible. It looks fine while I'm looking at it on my laptop screen on these forums where it appears at a decently large size, but on the website and especially the app the cover thumbnail will be a lot smaller and I feel that it'll be hard to read. The green of "ticket to t" doesn't stand out against the sky color well, and the "of" overlapping the girl's head makes it challenging to make out as well. Maybe consider moving the characters down a bit to give the title room to breath at the top, increasing the size a tad, and playing around with the colors some more. I think if it were all the purple color of "love" it would contrast with the sky well. Or perhaps it needs a stroke or something, idk.

[AnonymousHouseCat]

I like the image! It looks polished to me, it has a good composition and I like that the girl in the middle looks directly at you, but I think the text could be worked with a bit: like make it bolder/larger or add a stroke around it to make it pop?

[vblairehawthorne]

We have some rather negative views around this cover, but I genuinely think it's good. I think what this cover need is good typography, and I would seriously check it out. Make the title a bit clearer and maybe play with the colors a bit to make it livelier, and you'd hook me and others too! You did a great job on it!

[flowershop]

It's a great cover in my opinion! I would click your comic based on the cover because your art seems nice :3 I think the art style will draw a lot of people in especially those who enjoy anime.

plus i'm not liking the colors combination

If you dislike the color combo, you can always play around w/ saturation and vibrancy in your art program. You could also try changing the background to make the characters pop more! I think it's really great. Good work!

[emmaemeh2011]

i thought about making dynamic poses but I couldn't fit in 3 characters at once with the poses i had in mind,
and thanks for the feedback

[emmaemeh2011]

Thank you ,yeah I'll definitely make another one some time,
and about the showing their personalities while making them interact with each other is the challenging part about
drawing a cover ( for me at least)
but I'll keep trying

[emmaemeh2011]

yeah i understand, now everyone is into romance
in the comic the two guys look much more different than how they came out in the cover

[KikiTaiga]

I would say no and here's a tip to make a good cover: to make people checking out you have to make a cover that mostly shocks the viewers at the first sight and readers are going to be intrigued about why the cover is like this... for example: the two guys kiss the cheeks of the girl and the girl have an expression of surprise or something like that. Funny to say... you have to do a clickbaity picture to make the viewers intrigued and clicking it... What I do: a clickbaity cover that will actually appear in the webtoon/comic itself

[emmaemeh2011]

thank you sure, I'll keep that in mind

[emmaemeh2011]

haha nope the boys are not twins and aren't related at all ,
and oh that's a good idea for a cover thanks

[emmaemeh2011]

I don't mind the critisism and thank you for saying you'll check it out
yeah I'll definitely fix the colors of the title , I was more fixated on the characters so i didn't really pay attention to it

[SignedA]

You're welcome ! And I watched the first episode of your webtoon and understood why you said you felt the inside of the comic didn't reflect the outside, the cover. I think there is no comparison to make, as you have decided to use 3d renderings for your sets.

It surprised me, and embarrassed me a lot. But given your subscriber ratio I guess there are some that don't bother. So not being a specialist in media mixing, especially mixing 2d with 3d, I have no solution to offer you to make everything more harmonious. So, I can only tell you to continue with what makes it easier for you the most, or possibly integrate this 3d in the cover, in small quantities, even this I find that your drawings are much better.

And also, just out of curiosity, do you have problems with the perspective or this choice of 3d was a need for speed? And also, are you the artist who modeled, textured and rendered these scenes?

[emmaemeh2011]

I still haven't uploaded any chapters of this webcomic online, this is a new one . you must be talking about ' better luck next life "
as for why I used 3d models ,it's not because I have a problem with perspective but it takes sooo much time for me to draw a decent background, so yeah need for speed as I have enough hard time drawing the characters (I got an old wacom intuos S, if I use it any more than this it's going to wreck my wrist and shoulder for good)
and no , those BGs aren't entirely made by me, mostly from skp warehouse

[vblairehawthorne]

You're welcome! And I think all of us feel the same way as you hahahaha! We want to highlight the spectacle so much that we often ignore the little things. And that's okay. That's a very valid and reasonable thing to miss. We are not professional designers, after all! We are just authors! And the fact that you made a beautiful design like this shows that you have more to offer than just storytelling. I'm excited to see more from you!

[CosmicLeon]

To be honest, no. I think you need to work on your typography. The type look hand written. not saying there is anything wrong with hand rendered type, but it looks like you just wrote it, compared to designing it. Your typography should be an element in you design, just as much as your images. Ideally you want the type and the image to harmonize.
Another things to keep in mind with your composition is hierarchy. what do you want see first? The characters or type. and what words do you want to stand out the most to inform the viewer of what your story is.

I suggest taking a quick graphic design course, to get the basics. there are plenty of videos out there to help you

Here are some examples of covers and designed type layouts.

[LydaJoy]

I would. Because I'm a sucker for romance and I like your characters.