Hi, I just noticed a few things in you comic and wanted to point them out. A review of mine would be nice but you don't have to if the comic doesn't catch your attention.
The first pages look like the art and the comic-making were done by two different people. What I mean by that is the art looks professional, but the red/blue background and the thick black lines and the wonky typesetting and speech bubbles look amateur. The bright white text bubbles also stand out a lot on the desaturated, dark art, making them look even more incongruent with the art. Starting page 3 things begin to look a lot better but the typesetting is still weird at times. Try to keep an equal amount of white space on all sides around the text. Also, consider making impactful/ emotional speech bigger/bolder, and putting it in spiky or tilted bubbles. The text is also kind of small. It's still readable, but might turn off a lot of people, particularly mobile readers.
I really like the unique style. The poses and angles are so dynamic and fun to look at. I love how much black you use.