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Feb 2020

Your comic is pretty good actually. A superhero action/adventure comic like the comics I make. I'll definitely make sure to keep reading. Like I said earlier, I also make superhero action/adventure comics. I won't direct you to my main series because it's long. So instead, you'll find this series easier to pay attention to:

Alright so I went through the first and second chapter of your comic and I really enjoyed it. I think you're lettering is very well done, I'm a big fan of a supernatural aspect within the modern day, a talking dog is always fun of course and I think the shading is often really well done. I found you did a very good job at world building, I found myself pretty interested and wanting more as I was reading and overall I think it was a very good reading experience. Sometimes I found the perspective looked a little bit off but in general it was a good time and I'm interested in checking it out more.

So I read through your first 3 chapters, started the fourth and then skipped ahead closer to the end. I really enjoyed your comic, I think it has a sense of humor to it, an interesting premise and some fun characters. My initial issues had to do with the lettering, I wasn't crazy about the font you originally used and the text was not centered often. But after skipping ahead I found that all those issues were resolved which is great because it leaves me without much negative to say based on what I've seen

At your recommendation, I read through what you have for the second season of your comic, after doing so I kind of just skimmed over your first part. It's an interesting premise, the second season almost reminds me of a plot I would see in an anime with how over the top it is with these three girls controlling the school (which isn't a bad thing because I like over the top) and I think you're characters you have are quite interesting. I do however think there are some points that could use improvement, I don't think it would hurt to work on the lettering a bit, the font is very thin and the text bubbles could use some improving. I find a lot of the time as well your backgrounds are empty and flat and could maybe use a bit more colour as well as some extra detail. Now like I said I did skim through the first part and I've noticed a huge improvement between the first and second parts which is great and if you continue to improve I'm sure you'll only get better. I think that improving the lettering could make a world of difference and really help to make it more visually appealing to the reader. For sure though I hope you keep at it and keep practicing.

So I read through Arrival and I really enjoyed it. I like the underdog feeling the humans have as they face this unknown enemy force with power that just surpasses whatever the humans throw at it. The designs were also very interesting, they reminded me of a lot of 80s cartoons with the mechs having a very strong transformer aesthetic I found as well as this alien leader whos design from what I could see made me think of something I would have seen in He-Man or the Thunder Cats. All in al a good read

Yeah, that was a fun read, you've got a good sense of humor and I liked seeing random cartoon characters randomly show up. I read through the majority of what you had there and they were all pretty entertaining my only major complaint was that some pages were done on lined paper and that made it a bit annoying to read and look at. Keep up the good work though

glad you liek , hope you read through all of them ,heh i could see the alien leader face off against mumm-ra and skeletor to see who is the strongest

Good sense of style and lighting. Good stuff man :slight_smile: still early to say much about the story but the pacing and paneling is good. There are some typos and misspellings though so I'd recommend double checking before you call it done. subbed :slight_smile:

Here's mine:

Hi, I just noticed a few things in you comic and wanted to point them out. A review of mine would be nice but you don't have to if the comic doesn't catch your attention.

The first pages look like the art and the comic-making were done by two different people. What I mean by that is the art looks professional, but the red/blue background and the thick black lines and the wonky typesetting and speech bubbles look amateur. The bright white text bubbles also stand out a lot on the desaturated, dark art, making them look even more incongruent with the art. Starting page 3 things begin to look a lot better but the typesetting is still weird at times. Try to keep an equal amount of white space on all sides around the text. Also, consider making impactful/ emotional speech bigger/bolder, and putting it in spiky or tilted bubbles. The text is also kind of small. It's still readable, but might turn off a lot of people, particularly mobile readers.

I really like the unique style. The poses and angles are so dynamic and fun to look at. I love how much black you use.

I think it's great so far! I like the humor and the art style (very unique). It has the comic hero style without feeling generic. There's a few typos here and there, but those are quick fixes. I suggests running through a word program, like Docs, just as quick double check. I typically like stories with super heroes integrated in the world's justice system (i.e. One Punch Man and The Incredibles) So it's a plus in my book!

My comic Love Me, Deity is about a college student discovering her supernatural origins upon starting freshman year and she's not alone!

It started last year and is currently on it's 4th chapter. There's an average of 20 pages a chapter so it's a tad long.

I like this a lot, the dude reminds me of Goku the way he just pops in and out of places lmao. Really good art style, and I got a kick out of the super hero suit. Got yourself a sub!

Here's my god awful manga. The art is really crumby in chapter 1, but I improved it a bit in chapter 2. Trying to improve it more as I go forward

hey sorry for getting back to you so late, I've had a crazy week. Anyway I read the first chapter of your comic and it seems fun, the action is pretty enjoyable to see, kinda feels like if anime met starwars which I mean I like both of those so I'm not complaining. My main issue is that there isn't a ton of back story so I wasn't totally sure what this was all happening. Fun time though all in all.

I liked it a lot actually! I thought your character designs we're really nice and cute looking. I liked how every character kind of had their own unique traits so they really stood out from each other. I was actually only planning on reading the first chapter but honestly by the end of the first I was kinda hooked, I wanted to know what was going to happen next and ended up reading 3 chapters and just kept wanting more. It's a really fun story

Hey thanks! I read through the first 15 pages of your comic, I think it's really neat, I like the contrast with the colours, I think the story is very unique and original. I found it a bit hard to read due to the font style sometimes but it was never too difficult that it was off putting. All in all I was pretty interested in the unique story, I think your character interactions were pretty good as well and I am kind of interested to read some more.