okay so I am a sucker for world building so stumbling across your comic was a really cool and a breath of fresh air! I really like how you lean in fully into your middle eastern influences.
When I was reading your comic there were two areas that I would have liked to seen done a bit differently. Firstly, you use a lot of bright saturated colors. In scenes where there is multiple people or multiple characters it makes it hard for the eye to figure out what to focus on because everything is grabbing my attention. So I get a bit lost in the picture.
Secondly, sometimes you have really large blocks of text which kind of remove the momentum of the comic. Plus, since these large blocks of text tend to be on the side or the bottom I spend more time reading the text than looking at your cool artwork! Since this is a comic, I think you should try to find ways to interweave that information in more comic story driven ways.
I can tell you put a lot of thought in the world and even in the first few pages it feels like this is a universe with history and people with complex motivations so keep up the good work!
