Sure, here's what I thought.
Super clean, professional, cute, funny!
The text on top of each other is really cool, and adds a lot to the story. However, it is kind hard to read, and I know this is probably intentional, but if you upped the line spacing a little bit more maybe that would help make it more legible.
You have such a cool original concept with the Meowbeow, but I keep thinking of Pokemon because the face looks like a Pokeball. Not sure if that was intentional or not, but you could change the face slightly and this issue would be solved.
Overall, lovely style, great story, and I can't wait for more!
