Now The Grand preistess B @ExodusGuard
Okay I have nothing but praise. Its beautiful, the art chefs kiss, the story was melancholic and beautiful and the characters and their dynamic (another kiss). Its just amazing you should at least get some prize in that contest because if not that would be a crime.
The main problem I found it that since this as you said is going to be a planned series, it feels like I was dropped into a middle of an interesting world and I was waiting for some backstory and explanation that never came. Verashana and her her brother's relationship before he became an evil dragon thou was interesting on screen it felt like there was several pages missing, so I it kinda come off as a bit shallow, with their limited screen time, so her killing him though powerful didn't felt like the gut punch I was hoping for.
Overall good job, Hope your full series goes off without a hitch.