@MegaRay Hi, I read your comic and I have subbed to it cuz I don't know why it only has 29 subs, when it is just so good! The composition, foreshortening, and landscapes are excellent, and I love the way you have used textures. I also like how you combine realism with cartooning. Also the dragons and fantasy creatures are awesome! Your story has good pacing and I really like Lars. Keep it up
@Fedriz_Marini I love how your art looks like it's from a game, and I agree with everyone else that the mom is lovely and the relationship between parent and son is realistic, it kind of reminds me of "The Princess Bride" family aspect. You have good coloring and shading and I think you will go far with your work.
@alextsarace I like your art style. It's very 1960s-1970s underground cartooning with the thick lines. A lot of people prefer detailed art, but I still think being detailed is not necessary to convey a good story, and simplicity is more important. You have shown a great knowledge of color, and line. Your characters also have good dialogue and sometimes it feels like you are there in the room with them. The only thing I would suggest working on is the text size because sometimes the text was too small and I had trouble reading it. Keep all text the same size and spacing, and don't fit in too many lines. Split up your sentences. If you have more you would like to write, just add a second or third speech bubble instead, but don't add too much text on a page. People prefer images over text, and omit unnecessary words when needed.
I will review more comics next week. Happy Friday everyone, and good luck!