@TheDoublekey Hi I read your comic. Very suspenseful beginning. I really like the mysteriousness of it. You have a very interesting art style as well. So many people have an issue with sketchy lines, but you pull it off majestically where the scratchy lines give a layer of darkness to the story. It also adds a texture to the characters. I also like the way you play around with shading and different styles of shading. This makes everything stand out.
My only suggestions are to show and not tell. I think you have learned a lot from your mistakes, and it works better if you show a character's actions and thoughts instead of talking about them. This will bring up the suspense by a lot. Also, get rid of unnecessary words/lines you don't need and make everything matter. If there is a line that is sticking out and not doing much, erase it. If you have an adjective next to another adjective and both of them technically mean the same thing, get rid of one and keep the other. You are a god and this is your world. Everything you make has meaning. Hope this helps and good luck!
@Stargazer31
I read your comic. I really like how the story is based off of Norse mythology. It's very funny and the art style is cute. I did not expect that twist at the beginning, which means your storytelling is very complex. The only thing I would suggest is using a straightedge when drawing your panels as I feel like the wobbly lines are distracting. You can use a template, or you can use the "draw a box" tool. That is the only advice, otherwise everything else is already great so keep doing it.
@cosmicnano11
Good start to your comic so far. Nine's room is unusually clean for a gamer and that is something I find ironic. You use interesting vocabulary, and I love the way you draw. Your shading and foreshortening are excellent and complex. As for backgrounds they aren't bad. You spend a lot of time on the face and body so there really isn't a need to draw backgrounds, unless you're going to put your characters in a landscape or fight scene. It looks good so far. Even though your art is cartoony, the proportions are accurate and the art engages the reader. Nice job and keep up the good work 
