I'm new and want to give your novels feedback!

[MakaylaSophia]

Hi!

I'd love to give some feedback, in the form of a comment, on your first chapters! I'm new to the Tapas community, and I thought this would be a good way for me to give back to the Tapas community!

I enjoy reading:
* Fantasy / SciFi
* Any age

I'm not huge fan of contemporary, but I'd give it a shot!

A little about me! I was previously an intern for a publishing company, I am a Wattpad Star, and I am a book reviewer with a number of large publishers. In my free time, I do beta reading with a focus on editorial improvements, mostly developmental.

If you'd like me to give you some feedback on your novel's first chapter, feel free to link it here. I'll try my best to do them when I have some available time.

If you'd like to check out my profile, you can do so here: https://tapas.io/makaylasophia -- but don't feel obliged to!

[elleswoop]

Hi there!
I'd love any feedback for my novel
Thank you in advance!!

Charlie's Gonna Die | Tapas

[LostSpirit]

Oh. It would mean the world to me if you gave this a shot!

I'm just as new, only slightly older here!

Curse of Immortals: Tempestatem | Tapas

@elleswoop Hi. I'd recommend this person's work as well, Charlie's Gonna Die. It's a very interesting premise! I've been meaning to read it for a while now.

Sorry, I got sidetracked.

[elleswoop]

Ahhh!!! I'm flattered, thank you so much!

[An_Alias]

Hello!
Any feedback you can give is great! You can be a critical as you want, my goal is to learn. I specifically struggle with scene descriptions since I can't picture things in my head. My stuff isn't fantasy or scifi though, so I understand if it's not something you're interested in giving feedback on.

Thank you!

Boil Frogs Slowly | Tapas

[ivanskilling]

Welcome to Tapas! I hope you enjoy your time here.
And that's very nice of you to offer feedback! If you don't mind, I would love to see what you think of my novel.

Dark Bytes | Tapas

It's a series of short stories, so feel free to pick any you would be interested in. I appreciate any feedback you have!

[ZFalk]

Hi! Welcome!!! I just started reading your Bound by Shadow and it's so good! Excited to read more, and you're so sweet to offer feedback

I've got a fantasy wip that's kinda light fantasy / BL

The Potion Master's Apprentice | Tapas

Only if it catches your fancy, you've probably got a lot of reading to do lol! Happy for any feedback, and I'm pretty thick skinned usually, too, so go for it

[Anihime]

Welcome to Tapas! ^^

I'm not sure if my novel fits into the genres you're interested in, but I wouldn't mind getting some feedback on my novel if you have the time.

Back in the Day | Tapas

[mcarrowolga]

Hi
How about a short sci-fi story?

Tales from the Afterworld :: 001 - SOUL BAIT (sci-fi) | Tapas

[hjpetersonauthor]

Hi fellow wattpadder! Here's a read you'll enjoy if you like fantasy novels involving war, monsters, and just a touch of romance. There's only one chapter up, but I'll be posting a second chapter in a couple of days

Godswater | Tapas

[sarahmassey998]

Mines a horror story but there's fantasy too. Love that your offering feedback.

Prometheus Reanimated :: Chapter One | Tapas

[MakaylaSophia]

Hi @elleswoop and @LostSpirit, I've left feedback comments on the first chapter's of both your stories. You both had fantastic starts, and I am honored you allowed me to give you some initial feedback.

Everyone else, over the next few days, I will be slowly working through the chapters you've submitted. I am excited to see what all of you have written. Words are such a precious thing, and I commend each of you for putting your stories out there!

[madkatartist]

Hello! I'd love your opinion on my webcomic! Thank you in advance!

A Dance of Dragons | Tapas

[NOBA-3A]

this is very helpful, i'm an amatuer writer so i would like some reviews about my new-released novel, it's genres is Adventure and comedy and called a journey for revenge.

A journey For Revenge :: A start of A flashback | Tapas

[ladyealor]

I would love some feed back. Only 2 of my seven alpha readers have been reliable, and I'm eventually wanting to publish this and turn it into an audio book with my brother's help.

This is a high fantasy adventure with plenty of shenanigans.

Cerberus Rex, Nameless | Tapas

[ella190831]

oh, a bit of feedback wont harm
while my english book is not edited i'm vey interested to know about the characters and plot more

The Spider's Pall [soft bxb] | Tapas

is more a horror/fantasy mine

[shemarhenry90]

Hi hope your having a good day. Order of fantasy a new fantasy, action and adventure novel.
Check out Order of Fantasy on Tapas https://tapas.io/series/Order-of-Fantasy