elleswoop
Elle Swoop
I'm a new creator to Tapas! I'm just testing the waters to see if I like publishing my work. My novel is called "Charlie's Gonna Die"
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That's really good to know. I was just starting to rewatch the first season of FearTWD. Saves me a ton of time XD
Maybe figure out where you want the plot to go before you post this 
I don't even-??? Just...why
Not sure if anyone said it yet, but italics are gone. Like...the words are just gone.
It's typically good if it makes sense. Killing off a character just for shock value is icky. The Walking Dead has a reallll bad habit with it. Or had, idk, I stopped watching after they killed off a bunch of characters I liked
Ahhh!!! I'm flattered, thank you so much! 
Hi there! I'd love any feedback for my novel 
Thank you in advance!!
Those lines of dialogue are crazy good. I don't have anything even remotely close to that, but I do have some gory-ish lines from a novel that I abandoned? Idk, I had to dig deep to find something for this post. I had skinned some of my victims before--just to see how it felt--and it was very surp…
Hi there! I have a fairly new novel that I do for funsies. I'd appreciate any feedback. 
Wow, this is awesome! I totally see all of the details you mentioned. And the hair hahaha. I tried to hard to not do every hair. I promise I try not to. But it wasn't working out, and then more and more hairs were added until I was drowning in curls. Digital is a totally different animal than tradit…
I've never been more unhappy to see Tim and Moby than when I had to look them up to see what my sister was talking about. It was devastating
I was thinking maybe his eyebrows weren't low enough? There seems to be a lot of space between them and his eyes.
It's a funny topic and deserves responses lol
Thanks! I was thinking that too, but I couldn't quite pinpoint the exact problem area.
It started with my first character design on paper, then I moved it into digital to get some practice with the software. I didn't start with the intention of making a cover--though it is currently a cover, but that's just due to me needing anything other than what I had before. Here is my original s…
The College Student: Hoodie or big t-shirt, depending on the weather Leggings or joggers, also depending on the weather Dead eyes and/or look of despair The same ratty Converse every day Messy hair despite great combing efforts (not optional) Backpack with papers from like...two years ago Title…
So, I recently (last night) decided to hash out some art for one of my characters. I'm not very familiar with digital software, nor am I comfortable at all with coloring, but I was pretty happy with how it came out (lineart sucks, oh my gosh!). And then I showed it to my sister, and the first thing …
Booger Diaper Sprinkles... [image]
@ValKree Thank you so much! 
@DiegoPalacios Yeah, I was really impressed with how well they took the criticism. And oh boy, they sure are getting the memes. @An_Alias I feel like having someone with me would've made me feel a lot safer watching it lol. And I blocked out the end bit but do remember slamming my laptop shut and …
For the first one, I'm imagining a fantasy novel? Second one, maybe fantasy as well, but definitely romance.
Ah, I watched that! They should've pulled a Sonic and gone back to the drawing board once people began complaining over the trailer.
For those not blessed with seeing the movie yet, this is cat-Idris Elba. Enjoy. [image]
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--I locked eyes with this fucking cashier and thrust the ladle in his direction. He lazily accepted it and stared at me, waiting for anything I had to say. “There was a zombie in your bathroom,” I informed him.-- I enjoy this paragraph because it's absolute nonsense. Even with context, it's still …
It felt like a fever dream, I agree. Sometimes I see cat-Idris Elba when I close my eyes.
@akemikae Ahhhhhh, I love your comic!!!
I very recently watched Cats and...am in shock? The trailer made everything look so nice and gave the suggestion of a plot. And then I watched the movie??? Besides the obvious issues of the horrifying CGI (those mouse people, ohmygod), it seemed absolutely devoid of any plot or purpose. I was soooo…
Wandering and Under Satyr's Orders are the ones I can think of right now. Wandering will definitely be closer, though.
I looked at your first episode and your newest episode, and the art looks significantly better. Not that it looked bad before, but it seems more consistent and readable overall. Keep up the great work!!!
Oooh, those are good ideas! Thank you so much!
I do love me some snacks. Thank you for the suggestion!