I can only speak from a personal opinionated standpoint so of course take with a grain of salt.
But, for me, yes the Art of a comic attracts me, it doesn’t have to be Davinci level amounts of talent but I just have to like the art style in order to keep going. Like with anyone that varies from person to person, so while with one person may not like your style someone else will, it all depends on the reader. But for me, while a art style I like is great, It’s the story that makes me stay
So no, the art doesn’t have to be amazing, but I have to like it in order to at least get started. With that said no your art isn’t bad, it has a unique style which is great, of course like all of us you can improve with certain elements, one could be like some have said, simplifying designs.
Years ago I asked for character design tips to improve on my mc and people said to possibly look into taking away and simplifying a lot of the elements, (clothes, etc)
Alot of those unnecessary elements I took away, just because it was a distraction and didn’t really fit my style now looking back; the eyes wander with the image on the left and the design just felt really unfocused and overly complicated. Not even mentioning some of the anatomy hiccups (very skinny arms, legs) but that's another story
So yeah, that could also be a possibility you could look into in the future with your own character designs, cause it helped me a lot