I've begun writing act two of Through Mortal Eyes and I want to know if I did a better job than the previous act. For those who are familiar with my novel and wish to follow up, i recommend not missing any chapter from here on out because it's already getting serious.
If you're new to my novel i recommend starting from chapter 1 or 2 so you understand what's going on
Feel free to post your most recent chapters for review as well
Here it is
