Okay, so I don't have much experience critiquing a script, but I'll do my best.
PROS: The story is pretty easy to follow. It seems to cover a good amount for its length. Good intro, middle, and ending. I like how you aren't following the 9 panel grid too rigidly, but instead altering it some.
CONS: Page 5 is a little sudden and the ending feels abrupt. Tara's narration sometimes sounds awkward. It sounds like she's just talking to herself or stating the obvious sometimes. But I'm terrible at dialogue, so not sure how to improve this. Lastly, I'm unsure what the title means.
Overall, it's really well written. Hope this feedback is helpful!