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Trapper Howard? With a name like that you need to be a Badass... Though the story is a little slow-pace for my taste it's got me intrigued. It's the old west drifter vibe to "we don't take kindly to stranger around here." Got to say though, the suspense is killing me, because I know shit about to happen the question WHEN?! Either way, I'll subs to Gamblers sub... The Rules of the world kinda fall into the rules of my comic of Infinite Strike about being a Wastelander; Survival of the Fittest

"Grasshopper, your Kung Fu is strong." Thanks for this post. I am struggling to read what I've already subbed to. But here is my new novel, a sequel actually. Just updated and only have 1 sub.

A little hard to read... I would go back and fix a couple of things but overall, the story the is interesting. I always was fond of story of the sacred tree, Holy tree, Yggdrasil lore, etc. Anything to do with the Tree of Life is always going to get my attention hands down. As for Jasper, sound interesting to me... He was born and already being treated like dirt right from the start just because a half-breed. I know his being treated like garbage, but I like it, lol. it has Inuyasha background vibes to it... where half-breeds are treated like filth which is an element story plot that is in my webcomic Infinite Strike so instant sub from. Keep up the good work. I just hope in time, Jasper grows a backbone and stands up to his messed-up family because geez

Final realms is giving me weird vibes of Kingdom hearts meets The Gods of Olympus lore... where the greed is the Bright Light situation... interesting, I like it. though I am confused but, in the beginning, why everyone is getting empaled by the light greed thing? Divine light is not supposed to that to you, I mean, damn. Either way, keep up the good work

So far I love it, My favorite is Grape in his "I don't take shit from no-one" attitude but is still the nice guy. I just hope Apple doesn't Stalk him for his friendship. Instant from me. Keep up the good work

Thank you for reading, sorry it's hard to read it's like that cuz when I wrote it, it was supposed to be in a comic format but changed my mind cuz drawing people hard. I will try to improve on the reading problem. And I also love tree of life stories. Again, thank you for reading

That makes more sense Because I was wondering why it's look more like a monologue than a novel... It kinda had the monologue style that I use to right my comics... but it all makes sense about the formatting... But Yeah I did enjoy your story, Keep up the good work

Not going to lie, the first part of this story... I was thinking about Star Wars... an old man living in a cave in an alien planet... Obi Wan? but the story is interesting... I kinda sad thinking that the alien dog died trying to protect him, but I am glad to hear he was waiting for him outside. and Do agree Warrior is a hell of a better name than Spot!
The old man insanity is keeping him company, it's strange but I like it. Keep up the good work

Paris sounds divine... I mean, Walking SEX?! Well damn boy! Lord have mercy LOL... Your story sounds interesting and appealing and like the terms you used to describe your characters, GOTTA SAY THOUGH; Walking SEX is my favorite, I've never heard of anyone being referred that way but its awesome, I like it

Thank you for the opportunity! My latest chapter just dropped today! :smile:

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Your story is so sad! but then turns really quick! I can't wait to see what happens next! does people are so dead!! The fall of the empire for killing that maid! Over something so stupid! So if Raoul want's to destroy everything, I think it's justified. and truly hope Amelia is the first to go... Slow and painful.

I would be surprised if Thomas starts to commit crimes himself in order to spices up a bit... I mean, that's the vibe I am getting from this guy. Your story sounds interesting... but slow pacing is killing me

Oh, cool I am already subscribed to you and this story because The girl kinda reminds me of the Cleobelle in Infinite Strike how she gets... later... but Ara is sweeter than Cleobelle.

I updated just three days ago!!

I have a hard time giving this one a definitive genre cuz it has elements of action, comedy, and horror in it, but I don't think any of those effectively describe it. But I can say for certain that I put a lot of love into my story and I hope it comes through in the art :3