Hello everyone,
I hope I'm not taking too much of your time.
I've recently rewritten and updated the first chapter of my novel from the beginning,
and I would be truly grateful if you could take a moment to read it and share your honest feedback.
I'm hoping to understand what areas need improvement and whether the beginning works well as an introduction to the story.
Your support would mean a lot to me.
Also, please feel free to share the links to your own comics or novels —
I’d love to read and support your work as well!
Thank you so much in advance
