Looks good, like others have said you're English is great. The art style is nice, it's consistent and easy on the eyes. I totally know how the twin thing is, even though I don't have one people would always think me and my sister were twins. Probably because we acted and looked so similar.
Anyway, I'm glad you only asked for the first page, because I only have the first one out so far. cough
My comic is Speechless