Okay here's how the game works.
A person posts their newest comic page or a page they want critiqued. The object of the game is to identify the best panel on the page, and what's the panel that needs some work. Explain why or both. Then post your own page, with a short intro and a link. Then the next person reviews yours!
I'll start us off.
Here's a page from @Riana's Suihira! Thanks for volunteering as tribute Riana!
Best Panel:
The last one. I love how the whole bottom image borders everything else. It sets the mood and tone of the page, and shows us how the character is going onto a huge journey. The composition is wonderful leading the eye into the wild blue yonder, and the color space gives us the feeling of a cool desert night. The stars are great, and those birds that fly in the distance lead the eye forward to the horizon, making the viewer wonder just what lies beyond it.
Needs Work:
2nd Panel on the left side. While this is drawn beautifully and you can see the determination on the characters face, this is a shot that's been used and reused quite a lot. It's cliche, but it's cliche for a reason - it works! While it looks great, I wish there was maybe a different angle, or a different way of showing that determination without going to the 'shurgs bag on shoulder with determined face mid-shot'.
Here's the most recent page from the comic my team and I work on called Kamikaze.
And now, it's your turn! 
