I'd give it a look. I like your use of bold color and texture. I would suggest some clearer line work, though, especially where you have two things of similar color next to or overlapping each other. Also, if you have two dark colored things near or overlapping each other, try using a thin, lighter outline of the foreground image. That's only to make your foreground images look clearer. Of course, I have a visual impairment that is not completely correctable, so I hope you take my suggestion as a request for a little accommodation rather than a criticism of your art work.
I like the premise, and because of that, I'll look at it. It's the story and the characters that drive my interest in a comic. Good art is just a bonus.