Why thank you for all the thinks, and I was expecting an even lower score to be honest 
The artist I work with (Wan) sure does use nice colors when making her illustration, and in many of the pages and the official illustration she made it shows, that is why I stick with her 
and about the Dreamers, you weren't wrong, Destiny in part inspired their design, but also a bit of Terra from Kingdom Hearts. (I really would like to show you the full height chart with all the Series characters, but at this point it would be way too spoilerous).
About Alfredo, and I don't have fear to reveal this, as the last dialogue implied it, He grew up mostly around His mother and her friends, all adults, as He never had contact with other kids, but that is not the only reason, Alfredo is quite a prodigy, and can learn things faster than the average kid, His only flaw in such regard is the He does apply this quality only depending on his emotion: If stimulated, He does apply, like when He read his favorite comic books or spend time with his loved one, but when He is in discomfort, He goes in the opposite way, as well as in that case he is more prone to tantrums and fits, and can be stubborn.
The comic is quite in early days (ALtough, I admit the prologue was drawn last april, but kept aside), And what helps me the most is that, at this point, I have already written more than the 80% of the whole series (The 5 arcs of the comic following the prologue one, which one is in the drawing phase as of now, the Main Novel story who just need it's last fourth written and then the whole thing revised and translated in english, and the Epilogue series that will come after I've completerd the Main story), I have maps, Notebook and even heighcharts that helps me keep track of everything, even on what I have to revise and write down (You wouldn't believe that I've researched the entirety of london to take the traveling times reference to make the schedule of the worlds transportations just because I can't help it with details).
In the end of this papyrus, I would say, this comic series mainly has the purpose to introduce the world, the character and the plot for what will be told in the novel, as I thought a debut comic would have been more approachable for introducing the people to the series, also because it's the only thing I've actually finished writing, and I would never start pubblishing the novel until it is finished (I don't want to end up on doing retcons like long running series, so I mostly prepare the whole thing already and divide it for publishign), sure, unlike the comic, to which the release is weekly in order to help Wan with Her pacing, the Novel will be more frequently updated, as a Chapter of mine is 4 episodes here on Tapas (Did a test as also I tested the way to implement illustration... Never was that satisfied before.).
Anyway, thanks for the critique, and to have bear this long text of mine (I'm quite a Talkative Mr. Exoposition and I have to refrain saying thing that might be spoierous.), and the following weeks parts will introduce also more Characters, (Part 6 and 7 being a change of scenery no less), and what is the main plot of both the anthology and of the novel.
With all this said, thank you so much, enjoy your stay, have a nice day!
