I am a newbie on Tapas and I am wanting to have critical advise for my work. This is a LGBT+ fantasy/ BL romance book. I have published about 22 chapters yet. I would like to have a advise over the characters and the world building of the book. Here is the synopsis :
Synopsis:
Elliot Eves is pulled into a strange realm of Magical Creatures and Elf sorcerers. He is the first 'Pathseeker'( ones who can travel freely between the four realms of Existence) in the last five hundred years. For the beings here, his blood is far more precious than his life itself.
Even in this living mess, there is a ray of hope. An Elf is there beside him. The feeling he has only by a glimpse of him makes his heart to pound leaps and bounds. Is this love? Then, who is this guy with shadows surrounding him, who comes so often in his dreams and stares at him with those longingly, teary eyes.
What is love anyway? Is true love just a myth or reality? Can love really bind two souls for eternity? Or it's as fragile a life itself. And what dark secrets do the fates have for these Pathseekers?
"To die for someone is easy my friend, to live for someone is the harder part. And I chose both for the same person."
-A quote from the novel
Here is the link to my work:
Thanks for giving me your precious time and for the part of reviewing your work, you can send me the link to your work.
Thanks once again