Gosh, I was taken aback by just how beautiful the stained glass are! The text is adequately large and visible, the art is absolutely stunning with all the details, and the intro is just intriguing.
One thing I have to say, though, is how the art isn't really dynamic. One advice I can give you is to draw the lines in one swoop, so that it's not all wobbly and jittery. It may take practice, but you can crank up the pen settings to make it easier to draw smooth lines. That will help make your drawing more dynamic and 'alive'.
I'm really looking forward to the next episode!