Hi everybody, I launched a new webcomic a few weeks ago, and I'm interested in getting some feedback on the episodes so far.
This is my second comic, and after getting some great feedback on the first one, I've tried to incorporate that feedback and improve my art and storytelling in general. I think I've made something that looks much better, and it is doing a little better (at least on that other platform with the 'W') but I feel like something's still holding back its performance.
So I'll link it here and I'd really appreciate any feedback people might have!