Looking for feedback on my Novel(First few chapters)

[TheGreatOne6000]

Hello!

So I made a slice of life/romance webnovel and would like some feedback on the first few chapters. You are free(And encouraged) to read more if you somehow enjoy my story. I intended for the story to have some heavy thematic elements on talent, self loathing, purpose, and identity. However, I'm young and not very experienced so I want to know if my execution was done properly.

Short summary: A boy goes to the 2nd best high school in America and meets a girl. His relationship with her and those around him develop and change in platonic and romantic ways.

Feedback in the comments or in reply to this thread. Either is fine.

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[tiff524]

So, I read a couple first episodes and left some feedback in the comments. I'd say, keep going and finish it. That's always the first steps. Enjoyed the high school setting and the teenage angst. Happy writing!

[TheGreatOne6000]

I saw them! Thank you so much! Your story is also really well done.